NOTES FROM ADAM FRICK
On Effective
Writing
Who reads your English, and what do those readers need from you? These essays ask you to look closely at choices that can hide a claim, blur an instruction or interrupt an argument. I offer a view, show the effect through examples and explain the supporting evidence. Start with the manifesto, or choose a sentence problem from your own work and test my advice against that problem.
18A topic sentence establishes the point your reader expects you to develop. Against that promise, I test the support and show how a confident opening can overstate the paragraph. The examples connect that opening to the wider argument.
Read the essay. ↗19A named reference can connect an earlier point to the explanation that follows. Across a paragraph boundary, the same principle helps the reader recognise why the argument moves. I show both directions through examples at sentence and paragraph scale.
Read the essay. ↗17COHESION AND WRITING RESOURCES
A sentence can be clear while the connection to the next sentence remains hidden. To make that relationship visible, I turn to Manchester’s Academic Phrasebank. Through colour-coded examples, I explain why the resource is my first recommendation and how to choose a link that fits the evidence.
Read the essay. ↗02DRAFT FOR REVIEW EXPLICIT SUBJECTS
A reader needs to know who or what a sentence concerns. By naming that subject early, you give the explanation somewhere to begin. I show how that small decision can bring the main action into view.
Read the essay. ↗03DRAFT FOR REVIEW REFERENCES
A phrase such as “this result” may look unremarkable, but the noun does useful work. Through that named reference, your reader knows which earlier idea you are developing. I explain how naming the reference helps you keep an argument connected across sentences.
Read the essay. ↗04DRAFT FOR REVIEW PUNCTUATION
A punctuation mark can connect two clauses without telling the reader exactly how the ideas relate. In comparison with that punctuation alone, I show how wording can name the cause or contrast. The question is how much help your reader needs, not whether a mark is allowed.
Read the essay. ↗05DRAFT FOR REVIEW PUNCTUATION AND CONSENSUS
An em dash can do several jobs, which helps explain why writers reach for the mark so often. Given that range of possible jobs, I look at what the reader has to infer and how a different structure can make the connection explicit. My preference begins with that practical question.
Read the essay. ↗06DRAFT FOR REVIEW PARAGRAPHS
A paragraph needs enough room to develop a point. A short burst may work in an advertisement, but an explanation usually asks more of the writer. In relation to those different purposes, I show how a beginning, middle and end can give an idea substance.
Read the essay. ↗07DRAFT FOR REVIEW COMMAS AND CONSENSUS
The Oxford comma attracts some surprisingly strong opinions. I compare publishing guidance and explain why I prefer to make the grouping clear through words. Within those publishing conventions, a house style can guide your punctuation without becoming a test of intelligence.
Read the essay. ↗08DRAFT FOR REVIEW LISTS AND SENTENCE STRUCTURE
A long list at the beginning can delay the action that makes the sentence understandable. To reduce that delay, I show how a compact subject and an early verb give the reader a foothold. The list can then supply the detail once the direction is clear.
Read the essay. ↗09DRAFT FOR REVIEW LIST ORDER AND RHYTHM
A list often reads more smoothly when the items grow from short to long. That recommendation needs judgement, especially when the sequence carries meaning of its own. In view of that meaningful sequence, I explain how to balance the order of the information with the rhythm of the sentence.
Read the essay. ↗10DRAFT FOR REVIEW LINKING LANGUAGE AND COHESION
A linking word should help your reader follow the reasoning. By naming the relevant cause or contrast, you give that connection more substance. I show how that extra precision can help one sentence lead naturally into the next.
Read the essay. ↗11DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH
“For whom” gives a relationship a visible form. I explain why I recommend keeping the preposition beside the pronoun. Through that visible pairing, the distinction serves a practical purpose beyond sounding formal.
Read the essay. ↗12DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH
A relative clause can select a group or describe the whole group. To make that difference visible, I compare the meanings through wording and punctuation. The aim is a consistent signal rather than a claim that British English forbids defining “which”.
Read the essay. ↗13DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH
“Since” can introduce a reason or a starting point in time. I explain why “because” provides a more specific causal signal. Against that grammatical background, a published NASA example helps separate correctness from an editorial preference.
Read the essay. ↗14DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH
A request can ask for an answer or make an action conditional. I show how “whether” helps distinguish those jobs. Within that comparison, I make room for ordinary English usage while recommending a more explicit pattern.
Read the essay. ↗15DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH
A small conjunction can change a requirement. I compare conditions that require both options with conditions that allow either option. In relation to that second condition, a published example shows how “or both” makes the combined possibility explicit.
Read the essay. ↗16DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH
A description can attach to the wrong noun or leave the actor unnamed. I examine a real NASA passage and a published teaching example. The revisions show how grammatical placement can make the intended relationship explicit.
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