English must change.Read the manifesto.
NOTES FROM ADAM FRICK

On Effective
Writing

Who reads your English, and what do those readers need from you? These essays ask you to look closely at choices that can hide a claim, blur an instruction or interrupt an argument. I offer a view, show the effect through examples and explain the supporting evidence. Start with the manifesto, or choose a sentence problem from your own work and test my advice against that problem.

START HERE. / THE MANIFESTO.

English belongs
to its users.

English already connects people with different first languages. What should that shared use ask of a writer, including a native speaker? The manifesto makes the case for new teaching conventions and examines the evidence for the settings in which English now works.

DRAFT FOR REVIEW Adam Frick · Illustrated edition · 28 October 2026
Read the manifesto.
DRAFT FOR REVIEW SENTENCES

How to write an
effective sentence

A sentence can carry a complicated idea without making the reader struggle through complicated grammar. I begin with the core, then show how you can build around that structure. The goal is room for your meaning and a clear route for your reader.

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Read the essay.
BUILD A CONNECTED ARGUMENT.

From a paragraph’s purpose to the next paragraph

  1. Develop an effective paragraph.Give the explanation one job.
  2. Write a topic sentence.Match the opening to the support.
  3. Link back and point forward.Carry the argument across sentences and paragraphs.
  4. Use Manchester’s Academic Phrasebank.Choose language for the relationship.
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PARAGRAPHS AND COHESION

Link back and point forward.

A named reference can connect an earlier point to the explanation that follows. Across a paragraph boundary, the same principle helps the reader recognise why the argument moves. I show both directions through examples at sentence and paragraph scale.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW EXPLICIT SUBJECTS

Name your subject.

A reader needs to know who or what a sentence concerns. By naming that subject early, you give the explanation somewhere to begin. I show how that small decision can bring the main action into view.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW REFERENCES

Name your reference.

A phrase such as “this result” may look unremarkable, but the noun does useful work. Through that named reference, your reader knows which earlier idea you are developing. I explain how naming the reference helps you keep an argument connected across sentences.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW PUNCTUATION

Why avoid colons and semicolons?

A punctuation mark can connect two clauses without telling the reader exactly how the ideas relate. In comparison with that punctuation alone, I show how wording can name the cause or contrast. The question is how much help your reader needs, not whether a mark is allowed.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW PUNCTUATION AND CONSENSUS

Why avoid the em dash?

An em dash can do several jobs, which helps explain why writers reach for the mark so often. Given that range of possible jobs, I look at what the reader has to infer and how a different structure can make the connection explicit. My preference begins with that practical question.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW PARAGRAPHS

Develop a real paragraph.

A paragraph needs enough room to develop a point. A short burst may work in an advertisement, but an explanation usually asks more of the writer. In relation to those different purposes, I show how a beginning, middle and end can give an idea substance.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW COMMAS AND CONSENSUS

Why avoid the Oxford comma?

The Oxford comma attracts some surprisingly strong opinions. I compare publishing guidance and explain why I prefer to make the grouping clear through words. Within those publishing conventions, a house style can guide your punctuation without becoming a test of intelligence.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW LISTS AND SENTENCE STRUCTURE

Put the list at the end.

A long list at the beginning can delay the action that makes the sentence understandable. To reduce that delay, I show how a compact subject and an early verb give the reader a foothold. The list can then supply the detail once the direction is clear.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW LIST ORDER AND RHYTHM

Build the list from short to long.

A list often reads more smoothly when the items grow from short to long. That recommendation needs judgement, especially when the sequence carries meaning of its own. In view of that meaningful sequence, I explain how to balance the order of the information with the rhythm of the sentence.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW LINKING LANGUAGE AND COHESION

Name the link between ideas.

A linking word should help your reader follow the reasoning. By naming the relevant cause or contrast, you give that connection more substance. I show how that extra precision can help one sentence lead naturally into the next.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH

Which versus that: identify the group.

A relative clause can select a group or describe the whole group. To make that difference visible, I compare the meanings through wording and punctuation. The aim is a consistent signal rather than a claim that British English forbids defining “which”.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH

Because versus since: name the cause.

“Since” can introduce a reason or a starting point in time. I explain why “because” provides a more specific causal signal. Against that grammatical background, a published NASA example helps separate correctness from an editorial preference.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH

And versus or: specify the requirement.

A small conjunction can change a requirement. I compare conditions that require both options with conditions that allow either option. In relation to that second condition, a published example shows how “or both” makes the combined possibility explicit.

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DRAFT FOR REVIEW GRAMMAR FOR SHARED ENGLISH

Place the description beside the right subject.

A description can attach to the wrong noun or leave the actor unnamed. I examine a real NASA passage and a published teaching example. The revisions show how grammatical placement can make the intended relationship explicit.

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You may recognise a few of these problems in a text you are working on. Send me a sample and tell me what you want to improve. We can talk through the questions together and decide what kind of help would be useful.

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